I focused on trying to tell a story, because that's what I do. The last line is sort of a copout, but I was stuck for how else to finish. The title got a laugh.
These walls are far too quiet,
speaking of memories of a kiss
while the icebox holds only leftover
rice
within its closed-door dark abyss.
Out in the fields the trees
were growing nicely for it being June;
and next week was for harvesting peas,
seeing which oak branches he could prune;
it kept him from thinking. Crystal
left their vineyards and the bar
packing her low-recoil pistol;
and left behind was a well-used guitar
–.
For too long his ire has brooded,
and now this poem has concluded.
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