Wednesday, June 24, 2015

The Dedicated Little Sister

     To start with, this started with a poem that Ashland wrote years ago. The prose story I finished on June 24, 2015, and I'm posting this on September 3, 2015 during a study break. 

"The leaving soldier gave a hug
To his little sister.
"Must you go away?" she asked.
"Yes," he said and kissed her.

She waved good-bye to him,
As she breathed a silent prayer,
"Please God keep him safe
When he goes way over there."

She wrote him letters every day,
So he was  close to home.
She was faithful by the windows,
And was always near the phone.

For many months this happened,
'Till he shouted on the phone,
"Hey, dear sis, guess what?
I'mma comin' home!"

Ducking off the taxi,
While hugging his little sis,
He said "I love you" just before
He gave a great big kiss." 

     I remembered that poem this summer, and decided to try to write a prose version of it, in a ten-year-old's voice, since, after all, it's about the dedicated little sister. Besides, I figured it might be something to submit to Highlights or something like that. So that's what you'll be reading here. 

     “Do you gotta leave?” Kelsie asked her brother, giving him a long, hard hug.
     Andrew looked sad. “Yes,” he said. “I got to. Keep…keep good care of Mom and Dad, okay? And specially of Scraps.”
     “I will,” she whispered, nodding.  Andrew kissed her forehead.
     “Good. Stay out of trouble.”
     He turned around and joined the rest of the group of camouflage-wearing soldiers already at the security waiting line, while Kelsie and Mom walked out of the airport and back to their car.
     Just before they reached the car, Kelsie waved goodbye one last time.
     “He can’t see you, honey,” Mom said gently.
     “…Yeah. I know. But I just wanted to him to know, anyway.”
     She was pretty quiet for most of the rest of the day. Everybody was, really. Except for Scraps. Andrew’s tortoiseshell cat wandered around the house searching for him, meowing pitifully. She didn’t understand why he had to leave. Neither did Kelsie, really; only that it had something to do with a war and that meant Andrew was needed….somewhere. It had a very strange name that was impossible to say or spell.
     “Please, God, keep him safe while he’s over there…wherever that is. I need him to teach me how to hit a ball, and explain how to multiply things.”
     Life kept on, though. School started again, and everybody gradually developed a new routine. Daddy stayed at work more often, and when he was home he tried to teach Kelsie how to hit a whiffle ball, to get ready for softball season next summer. Mom looked like she wanted to cry a lot. So she worked in her garden and talked on the phone to her friends to keep her mind occupied.
     Kelsie went to school and then would write a letter to Andrew almost every day. He wasn’t able to write back very often, but sometimes he could. Those were good days, when Frank the mailman would walk up with a letter from him. Frank seemed to like that Andrew was writing them, and glad that he could drop those letters off. Mom or Dad talked to him about what the letters said once they’d read them, and Frank would tell what his son’s letters had said. His son was a soldier, too.  
     While Kelsie was writing to Andrew, Scraps would sometimes sit by her on the table or in her lap. Sometimes she would jostle Kelsie’s arm, and that made the pencil go all squiggily. When she complained to Mom about it, Mom said that was Scraps’s way of writing; so that made it less annoying. Everybody paid a lot more attention to the news, and the phone ringing made them all jump to be the one to answer it.
     She’d work on her math homework by the living room window, since she’d read in a book that watching windows was how cats watched TV. Scraps certainly did that a lot, and so she figured they could both tell if Andrew came down the road one day as a surprise.
     One afternoon in March the phone rang just as she’d gotten home from school. Mom was off in the attic somewhere putting the Christmas stuff away, so Kelsie answered it.
     “Hello? This is Kelsie. Who’s calling?”
     “Hey, sis! It’s me!”
     Kelsie almost dropped the phone, she was so excited.
     “Guess what?”
    “What?”
     “I’m comin’ home!”
     It was such good news, she had to tell somebody. So she ran and found Scraps and told her, and then told Mom once she came back downstairs.
     “Well, did he say when?! Is he okay?”
     “Nope. Just that he’d call back when he could. He sounded really glad to be back.”
     Shaking her head, but smiling, Mom went back to work packing up all the winter clothes. She even sang some, a verse or two of a church song or something from the radio. Kelsie read a book called Black Gold, by the same lady that wrote Misty of Chincoteague. Scraps’s ears went up and her tail fluffed out, seeing somebody pulling into the driveway. Kelsie looked up from her book and saw Andrew stepping out of Frank’s pickup!
     She flew out the door and wrapped him in a huge bear hug  “You’re back!”
     “Sure I am. Told ya I was coming, didn’t I?”
     “Well, yeah, but…”
     “He wanted it to be a surprise,” Frank said, smiling.
     “It was,” she nodded.
     “I bet.”
     “Love you, sis.” Andrew kissed her forehead. “Now let’s go say hi to Mom, all right?”
     They walked to the other side of Frank’s truck and hauled his duffel bag out of the backseat. Mom stepped onto the front porch. “Something wrong, Frank?”
     “No, ma’am. Just delivering a package.” He backed out of the driveway, revealing Andrew and Kelsie, hauling his duffel bag. Mom screamed and ran forward to greet her son.

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